Planted Wish

[New]

Blessed to watch my neonatal
Crumbling inside my cradle
In the womb I stretch the wall
Pushing 'til I reach the pall
Kicking, screaming for pure shit
I can win but I won't quit
My insane breeding makes my play
Morphable like fresh wet clay
Potential is my greatest threat
Victimized by 'not quite yet'
I'm at the line for real this time
Let failure not be my greatest crime

 

[dirzted]

This is fucking legit.

"Potential is my greatest threat, victimized by 'not quite yet' "

Makes my thoughts scream for a second if you know what I mean

 

[Pagey]

Love it.

 

[New]

Thanks, guys. I appreciate it.

 

[Thorns Have Roses]

I think those last four lines especially ought to hit home with a lot of BLers

 

[thujone]

nice, the yearning is visceral