pieces of us

[yoUr bLiSS]

your paper thin walls
don't offer much protection
to a heart as pure as yours

to rise and set in your arms
is that too much to ask?
you said

words of silence
echo through my head
your words
never spoken
yet always heard

in reality i hope for dreams
in dreams you hope for reality

can i wrap you up in always?
encircle you with hope?
drag you down with uncertainties?

one day
your smile will become yesterday
your voice last week
your lips last month
your touch last year
yet today
today will always carry your love

i remember when
your smile turned on
like a light inside of me

 

[neverwas]

i opened ths forum hoping to find something writen by you and did. theres just a feeling in this peice that today i really empathise with.

one day
your smile will become yesterday
your voice last week
your lips last month
your touch last year
yet today
today will always carry your love

prefectly worded hun.

xx

 

[RareForm]

can i wrap you up in always?
encircle you with hope?
drag you down with uncertainties?

i liked this alot - this was my favorite part

 

[Pantomime7]

one day
your smile will become yesterday
your voice last week
your lips last month
your touch last year
yet today
today will always carry your love

Love this part also........

Yet the entire piece is great! Mad Props!

 

[yoUr bLiSS]

thanks everyone. i really did just snag little snippets and pieces i wrote about me and my bf from the most recent notebook i have and put them all up here.

 

[up all night]

Lovely.

 

[drEaMtiMe*@#]

Originally posted by yoUr bLiSS
in reality i hope for dreams
in dreams you hope for reality

i like this. so very true.

nice work.