Piece

[mirabii]

Lying in the wake of a storm,
Feeling the aftershocks of
Thunder tearing me in two.
Trying to piece together
The fragile glass shards
Which arced from an overwhelmed hand.
I feel my tongue try
To restore a hint of moisture
To my frozen lips,
Surprised at the hint of salt.
I dare to open my eyes.
A flash of lightning
Mesmerises and I gaze
Into the storm,
As my body aches for
Thunder to roll over me
Through me, surrounding me
Aligning somehow with my core.
Now comes the rain,
Its gentle rhythm
Softening perception,
Soothing me with each
Tender touch.

 

[marbica]

wow, that piece just took me on a journey. nice flow.

 

[lilygirl]

beautiful. very unique and well written.
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i know there's beauty in all my imperfections

 

[FrEdDo]

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[Noodle]

No frown here. I haven't seen this moniker in awhile. Hi!
...these words created a mood, or rather described it with your literary mind.
Reading this piece leaves me with a feeling of awe for its emotive choice of word images, reflecting down-side up on the backside of the good ol' mind screen.

 

[madmick19]

an interesting side of you miss,
hmmm........the word behind the words
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the consciouness of self is the greatest hinderance to the correct execution of any physical action... u dont exist therefore there are no boundaries or limits

 

[FrEdDo]

Oh the magic of Global Underground 20 (Emmerson in Singapore) vs. Daft Punk - Digital Love.
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"Everybody, every-everybody, everybody's BIG now!"

 

[mirabii]

Thanx for your replies.. it's very nice to have them cos I haven't written in a while and I guess I got a bit of stage fright or something *lol*
Oh, and before I forget. Hi Noodle!
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if you found out you were dreaming, would you want to wake up?
Please don't interrupt me. That last sentence took a lot of effort to think of and now I have to think of another one.

 

[Roxie]

that was beautiful. i really liked it. it kinda makes you feel like the storm is really around you and the rain is really falling on you.
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"...The heartbeat will never fade. The party will never end. I am a raver, and this is my manifesto."
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