Phoenix

[for_sho]

Take my hand as i lead you to the sea.
Together we will plunge into a love so deep--
we will drown.
love so hot, our old selves will be burned away--
fire so bright, the stars will cry.
from the ashes--together we will be reborn.
for_sho
[ 29 November 2002: Message edited by: for_sho ]
[ 30 November 2002: Message edited by: for_sho ]

 

[for_sho]

Just wanted to say, you don't have to reply to this poem, but if you read it i'd appreciate it, comments, critisism, just saying "i read it" would be great.
Thanks
for_sho

 

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Makes me think of a Hendrix tune:
1983 (A Merman I should turn to be)
...So my love catherina and me
Decide to take our last walk
Through the noise to the sea
Not to die but to be re-born
Away from a life so battered and torn....
Forever...