periphrastic direction

[RareForm]

graciously sneering over the long black tide
arms bound waiting for a signal to sound
tones tenser than the nine times before
alimentative kanga in search of roo
a vine-infested shaft leans slightly to the left
snake slithered, mouse so wholesome
richly rooted extending less than intended
gazing back smiling, frowning realizing time is passive
under god remained, under a nation declined
senses altered seeing a sound rumble shake
definite thoughts growing irritable ear left
wicket shrinking glass not fitting

 

[cherub]

Definately like the flow of this one.
Though that thought of what is really going on is ewwww but i liked it.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Read this the other day. I must say it is the shit. Nice