Past

[New]

Blowing hard like a chain-smoker,
rotted past his prime.
Corotted thought bleeding
into my days, screeching
down
my brain.
It's cool, but it's not.
Pulsing and melting
all that is into flame-broiled
denial, trying to forget
details and debaucheries,
raucous and ribald horrors
committed and callously
kept in my keep, my
rotting retention of
memories malicious.

 

[TheTwighlight]

I like this...I've been reflecting on the past as of late myself...

 

[Jabberwocky]

you definetly have a way with words. these words seem to have been convulsed out grudginly between clenched teeth but all at once for fear of pauses least the truth not be shared.

i particularly liked this part

raucous and ribald horrors
committed and callously
kept in my keep, my
rotting retention of
memories malicious.

 

[Mehm]

ugly, gritty and real.

It reads like an opiate withdrawl.

 

[New]

Thank you. I often find the past has the most to write of for me.

 

[TheTwighlight]

^^^

Straight up, man. Bingo.