Part of me

[oceandreams]

Endless pools of liquid blue
Shatter into a thousand crystal shards
Piercing my soul
Wounds so deep leave the scars of yesterday
and still I bleed
Reminding me that you were once
a part of me

 

[Pantomime7]

Sad words. I like

 

[RareForm]

this is good stuff.

 

[oceandreams]

thank you as always. missed you guys since i've been gone.

 

[skjalff]

I like these lines a lot!!! Great rhythm and.. motion, very fresh!

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Endless pools of liquid blue
Shatter into a thousand crystal shards
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Nice write! I cant help it but sort of "see" blind instead of bleed, though, i've no idea why.. Great write, vastly enjoyable!


skjalff

 

[oceandreams]

skjalff:
so i heard you thought i was a guy.

 

[cherub]

^^^^ Your not a guy??? lol

definately a great piece,,,,

we missed you also !