Paint

[RareForm]

Paint me with your jealousy.
Succumb to the bitter depth I entrench.
Choose one or ten, to include the end.
Soften your gaze
In fear
I might choke.
To this point, all my smiles have meant nothing.
My own eyes have been gouged out
Replaced by your visions of delusional ecstasy.
Hush……
Don’t keep my soul waiting.
I’ve been eager for quite some time.
To feel what it’s like to be you.
Your menacing demeanor belittles me.
Conform to your benevolent works and wonders,
I will,
I won’t.
Either way you’ll be the judge of me.
You’ll turn into my shadow before long.

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

i like it, but i like all of your poems

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Strong words from a strong mind. Very, Very Nce

 

[KaideAlike44]

Soften your gaze
In fear
I might choke.

I like this poem, especially this, it makes you think.

 

[katmeow]

Damn, I really like this.

I imagine it would sound really great read aloud.

Good imagery, nice selection of words.