Paint it black

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

Spur of the monent random ramblings:

I lost a little more, of myself, of everything
when you would turn away
and hang you head in shame.

I died a little more, when you would shake your head,
at my actions, at your misgivings,
at misleading misconceptions.

I tried so hard, to make it all right,
I did everything that I could have, didn't I?
Except for giving up.

So now I paint it black,
paint it black for all to see.
Bitter, twisted, cynical.
A legacy of misery.

 

[Rollingrrl]

originally posted by Butros_butros_Grantos
I tried so hard, to make it all right,
I did everything that I could have, didn't I?
Except for giving up.

that's the hardest part huh? Knowing when to give up especially when you do absolutely everything you can to make it right and hold on. knowing when to give up is certainly a virtue in my book, one I'm afraid I haven't learned yet.

great work especially since its random ramblings. the scheme and flow is very good and of course the word choice and topic are amazing. you should write more 'ramblings', sweetie!

~Shelly~

 

[TiTTy]

So now I paint it black,
paint it black for all to see.
Bitter, twisted, cynical.
A legacy of misery.

Ive really like your ramblings. I hope you post more of them.

There is more to you than a post whore hope you get your 1000 post b4 new years.