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[femmme fatal]

*note: ignore all the periods, they're there for spacing...*
wasn't that you taking my hand?
wasn't that me smiling and laughing?
didn't i hear you whispering in my ear?
or was i still hearing the ocean.
when you looked
........................over your shoulder
and saw i was there,
you still
..........walked
...................away.
why wasn't it enough for you?
why couldn't you just love me
t h e w a y t h a t i a m?
wasn't that you telling me goodbye?
wasn't that me saying don't go?
were those tears in my eyes?
or was it only the wind.
aj the femme
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[Sara Tonin]

You absolutely have to know that you deserve to have someone that loves you for who you are and who doesn't walk away from you. Sometimes it's best when they walk away, no matter how much it hurts...

 

[harraser]

were those tears in my eyes?
or was it only the wind. WOW aj this is amazing, so sad and so very very beautiful. You truly do deserve someone who loves you for who you are, coz you are an amazing person and anyone that thats not good enough for doesnt know what theyre missing.*hugs* youll find the right person darls and on that day even the salty ocean wind wont be able to make you cry

 

[femmme fatal]

thanks guys
i guess i should let you know that i do have someone who loves me very much these particular feelings are older ones that've been bubbling up lately... that and i had a yen to play with line structure
aj the femme
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[Spencer]

that was totally awesome hun. The spaces almost left me gasping as I read them in my head. Verymoving. I definatly love this (and you)

 

[Dagny]

Stunning.

 

[Angelight]

you are an angel

 

[Jabberwocky]

why one of the best questions someone can ask. dont let it bubble up exploid a can of woopass on them
-phil-