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[doofqueen]

What once was warm
now feels like ice
the heat and passion
was my demise

The hard walls built
had come down
only for the brackets
to fall apart

To give and love
and taken nothing
cos doing things in halves
is not my style

Refusing to be closed
and bareing my soul
came with lessons
on this hard road

Clarity to others
i thought was best
cos when you give
it all comes back

When giving love
to a black lost soul
with hope that time
will heal it all

The only change
that is possible
is from one self
and not the devil

Now sits a heart
cracked in pieces
fearing so much
to be broken again

So hard to open
now that it's closed
Will the glue
melt once more?

 

[lostNfound]

I hope you get the chance for it to melt again

raw and honest, nice wun deequeue

 

[New]

How sorrowful

I've been there...it gets better.

 

[stonerfromohio]

love this piece, written from the heart... powerful

 

[doofqueen]

thanks guys

 

[Mjäll]

Nice. Keep using words sparingly. It's easier to read and more personal that way, imo.

 

[doofqueen]

I cant imagine a poem being anything but personal... thanks

 

[manic_panic]

wow, thank you!! i really enjoyed that! and the way it was written...

 

[doofqueen]

thanks

think i actually met someone that has melted me... he speaks to me in poetry and isnt even aware of it *sighs happily*