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I take a look around, the world is so serene
I close my eyes and take a breath, the cool air feels so clean
A subtle smile across my face, believing you are there
I have no worries on my mind, I breathe without a care

I open my eyes to see you're gone, my air starts to thin
My muscles tense, my stomach cramps, now suffering begins
I want to cry, but I can't breathe, I struggle just to live
I try to catch up to you, but my weak knees start to give

My face is turning blue and there's nothing I can say
Deep inside I feel you wanted it this way
I reach for you and gasp for breath, but you don't seem to care
I don't think you understand, you're all that is my air

You know it's you I need, but still you're pushing me away
You sit back and watch me struggle, as my lungs decay
and so, I stop breathing, knowing I will die
and with this last breath that I let out, I use to say, "Goodbye."

I used to say, "Goodbye."

I used to....
 
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