Out of Mind Enlightenment

[TiberCross]

The earth is illuminated along the path
And all around us it is scorched
Pieces fall away, eluding my grasp
and i realize that when walking the straight and narrow my feet become torched
not only are my feet in flames, my soul begins to contort
to erupt and evolve like a pheonix of some sort

i envision my past as a memory sphere
my heart is lost as i struggle for prayer
capsules of recollection bring me here
and i become divested layer by layer

Shorn and shining
Standing silent, my every sense heightened
Born again and blinded
Reincarnated through out of mind enlightenment

 

[DG]

i envision my past as a memory sphere
my heart is lost as i struggle for prayer

I like this part the best.

 

[RareForm]

Shorn and shining
Standing silent, my every sense heightened
Born again and blinded
Reincarnated through out of mind enlightenment

Wow..man, i really thought this one was well thought out....I really like this one from you...thanks for sharing bro..

Awesome Work!

 

[cherub]

Shorn and shining
Standing silent, my every sense heightened
Born again and blinded
Reincarnated through out of mind enlightenment

Definately my favortie part about this poem, I have always been fond of your work and your wording...... Very Impressive

 

[IXinX]

Amen

The only way to achieve enlightenment is to be out of your mind.

A Paradox

A maddening contradiction

 

[Prolapstriumph]

Imagery provided throughout was intense, well done i definately admire ya, for what i've read of your words.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

This is, yet again, an awesome piece. Very Nice

 

[neverwas]

gotta love food for though

excellent work

 

[raverchik]

good work, nice piece