>Out in public

[Noodle]

ho hum
>again this time lost
well,
>( maybe ) not really
just reflective
>in m( * ) inebriation
my performer
>without an audience
no give
>without a take
Now
>I hold my breath
waiting
>for the sun to change ( color )
>and then empower me/
>that
>or choose to radiate confidence
>regardless
Oh my
>oh well
spilled me coffee
>after a shot
and ( maybe ) a beer
no time left
>for sobriety
( or ) purely heartfelt mirth
only now
>it seems
is this time
>a happiness
provided by the bottle
>or glass
these feel, often like
>long times alone
>without a hug
or better that
>a pat on the back
>or even,
better still,
>caught, a loving glance
a smile
>broadcast
>out in public
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[ 20 December 2001: Message edited by: Noodle ]

 

[5FACES]

so sad, like a love song, waiting for brighter skies. they will come, all of the sadness will eventually elude to happiness.
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...

 

[Aja909]

This is p-i-m-p poetry yo'!

nice work Noodle!
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[Noodle]

Thanks Aj'.

 

[Stark]

I've been there
>I think.

 

[alykitty]

 

[ice-9]

beautiful, I like it!!!
nicely unorthodox, and still able to convey a strong feeling!

 

[mirabii]

Wow... I missed this one on the first way through.. I've been waiting to see some of your work, and it's been well worth the wait

 

[Noodle]

< shameless ( almost )

 

[Sinthetic]

< >
> <

 

[Web]

groovy noodle

 

[sunEdltye]

WOW NOODLE! good work. it's like 20th century avant garde writing. it was beautiful and ingenius.
Evan

 

[Dagny]

Oh Noodles! I'm so glad you bumped this!
Have I mentioned that I think you have a wonderful mind?? Because I do think that. And since I'm always right , guess what that mean!!!!
Wonderfully expressed darling.

 

[Noodle]

You all complete me
> at least right now
:D