Only a dreamer can understand

[BrightEyesIsMe]

Bitter pieces of the truth flowed from your mouth
You told me I needed more than what I could take
I thought I was walking backwards in a dream
Who was to know that you could watch the edge of a cliff, be scared of it, and yet walk off it anyway...
Nothing makes sense
It does not matter anyway because it is all in my head
I wake up in the night in a cold sweat
Get a glass of water and curl back up
To only then lay for hours before the Sand Man comes to me
He often forgets me these days
I don't know why
Make jokes, smile outside, laugh out loud, dance and sing
Inside, a scared little girl who cries in a lonely dark corner
Something is trying to get into my head
Something crazy
But my dear fellow I am in love with you
My night in rusty armor beckons me
He is on the edge of his horse right now...
I know it is my fault is he in that position
He begs me for an answer, a boost
I am not ready for him to shine yet
I leave for a few hours to find some answers
I seek for a great revelation
But you can not seek a revelation
They come to you when you are ready
But I am not ready...I don't think I ever will be
Something is missing...a hole that is beginning to crowd my heart
I know you are out there my little answer
You will be revealed when Father Time is ready

 

[cherub]

girl this is outstanding piece,, i relate to it well maybe too well

favorite part that just stood out for me was

I seek for a great revelation
But you can not seek a revelation
They come to you when you are ready


LOVELY like you

 

[RareForm]

you really really are getting better and better. i can see with each piece you write you are opening your mind, and accepting the thoughts and emotions that come to you. very descriptive of this feeling. great write! possibly your best if i may say.

~RF

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Wow, this is an amazing write. I love some of the lines and the poem is extremly strong throughout. Nice