One stand at a time

[Altered_Soul9]

One strand at a time

I am made of thread
Tightly woven into this meaningless body.
You glance away at my disgusting appearance
Your lies, your deceit feeds this unending flame
It blazes up and licks my back
The fire slowly burns and scorches my body
scarring it forever
I feel I'm made of thread
The twine unravels one strand at a time
Until I am nothing, but a pile of ashes lying dormant in your palm
Just....
Toss me away
Let me float away into oblivion
A place were I will never disturb,
Never bother,
Never annoy anyone
Just let me be free as I braid myself back together
One strand at a time

 

[cherub]

absolutely amazing,,,, strong but flows smooth, almost like you are weak and about to become strong again.... uplifting at the end.

 

[RareForm]

yes! uplifting indeed..

I feel like you are evolving into a very puissant full writer...keep it up bud, you never know what may come of it

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

Very nice. Yep it was strong. I like it.

 

[Martyr's Wife]

wow this was really good...hope you had a good thanksgiving...see ya in a few days...love me

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

i enjoyed this also.

 

[skjalff]

Great piece! I absolutely loved how you ended this one.


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