one last hour in jersey

[goodnitestar]

This spectical display .
mirth, and smiles
a place just as far, to close
counter acting memory
sensual attack on the mind
just to leave the steps stumbling
past the blue lit smoke filled rooms
down the corridor
noise, is a silent parade
grafiti filled alley
dirt on my face
just a stranger here, yet home I feel
surronded by uncertainty
beauty blends with greedy hunger
as I streach my hands to reach you one last time
saturating , anticipating
the next hour...
only mine to spend
like your last dime
wont buy you anything...
but you cant just pass it buy

 

[P58]

the next hour...
only mine to spend
like your last dime
wont buy you anything...
but you cant just pass it buy
^^^^^ I love that!!

 

[E-girl]

i was going to quote the exact same part.
fabulous, dear.

 

[*Venus*]

I had a bf in NJ...and I swear this poem was written for me. I took one last trip to see him after it was over. I knew it wouldnt get me anything, but I couldnt pass up the chance. He ended up blowing me off...
Awesome poem though.

 

[L O V E L I F E]

"^^^^^ I love that!!"
I third that.
Fantastic poem.

 

[P58]

this poem makes me smile