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[RaverMadness]

Children, stay away from pot.
It will make you lazy and shiftless
And you'll go insane and die.

Children, stay away from heroin.
It will make you homeless and dirty
And you'll go insane and die

Children, stay away from angel dust
You'll become invulnerable to bullets
And you'll go insane and die

Children, stay away from acid
It'll form lumpy crystals in your spine
And you'll go insane and die

Children, stay away from ecstasy
It'll put holes in your brain
And you'll go insane and die

Children, stay away from cocaine
It'll make you careless and irresponsible
And you might become president.

 

[titania]

LOL! :D

 

[katmeow]

Haha, I love it!

 

[Negative]

very nice! love that last verse, hehehe.

 

[Raz]

Children, stay away from angel dust
You'll become invulnerable to bullets
And you'll go insane and die

This sounds like irony and humor and tragedy all mixed in one for me. Dude, I really wish you'd write in here more....I love reading your stuff and I don't hang out much in Lounge anymore...

 

[RaverMadness]

I just don't write that much poetry...

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

we accept all kinds of writing here, just seems to be more poetry posted then any other form of writing, so...post more f*c*er!!! :D

a lot of people like your writing, myself included, and it does tend to get lost in the lounge if you don't hang out there regularly.

 

[E-girl]

i was expecting one of your insightful ramblings.... which, btw, i really do miss (now that i almost never visit the Lounge). but this was cool. and its nice to see your name pop up in this forum, for whatever reason.

 

[cherub]

agreed love seeing your name in the forum

This just made me giggle,,,,,,,,,,,, thanks

 

[xtcxtc]

And you might become president.

priceless.

as might be apparent i came here looking for your writings ( which are superb ) and now it seems i should be looking in the lounge rather than here.

arundati roy ( the god of small things ) but also her political polemics ( is that the right word ? )

D. F. Wallace ( infinite jest --- has anyone read apart from "infinite jest"? )