On this day, I will remember thee

[haste]

On this day, I will remember thee
For the life that was; a life that will never be
Fate does not smile upon us; she doth not hear our cries
Taken to battle to protect thy world
Held closely to thy breast, but pierced it is now
My love, my passion, my husband

On this day, I will weep for thee

What has brought us this fate?
O’ God of the heaven’s realm, keeper of the stones
Would thy mercy not dare look upon us?
On a dying soul, fought in battle to do thy bidding
Bring to us o’ mercy

On this day, I will pray for thee

I feel thee shudder
And gaze upon thy wound,
It bleeds thy strength
And drains thy soul
Life is slipping, from the grasp of my hands

On this day, I will hold thee

I listen carefully for a breath so fine, with all thy might
Passing through thy lips,
A murmur
Hold on my dearest, save thy strength
Be the rock to thy children
Be the rock to thy love

On this day, I will love thee

O’ God of the heavens’, mighty is thy power
Maker of the lands, ancient and beyond
Is it thy bidding to leave me alone?
To face the darkness,
I beg to thee
If this is thy fate, then take my love swiftly
And spare him the burden, the wrath and the torment

On this day, I will beg for thee

The skies darken in shades of grey,
And the creatures stir
From a bright opening in a angered sky
Appears your servant
A dragon of majesty, of power and might
Engulfing the souls of the fallen
I feel thee no more

On this day, I will mourn for thee

My heart falters and sinks into lowly depths
I have lost thee in presence
Thy touch I will crave, Thy passion I will thirst
But in my mind and burned in my heart
Thy memory will not falter

On this day, I will remember thee

 

[cherub]

haste babe,,,,, i love your raw dark pieces,,,,,, always have

this is another i was impressed with

hugs

 

[haste]

thanks sweety - I just write and rarely edit - with the exception of spelling mistakes.

I like my writing raw as it best describes the emotions that inspired the piece - if I edit and clean it up it becomes to sterile for me. There are plenty of people that write beautifully and lyrically but I don't think I'm blessed with that skill hehe. Or my dark morbid mind doesn't allow me

Once again, thank you

 

[neverwas]

Thy touch I will crave, Thy passion I will thirst
But in my mind and burned in my heart
Thy memory will not falter

On this day, I will remember thee

 

[Rollingrrl]

I like the style of this. your older word choices fit it very well. great job sweetie!

 

[haste]

Thank you