Oh aren't we precious (poem)

[serenafails]

Now's better time then ever to scrutinize my every move
Don't seduce me into thinking you have something to prove
Beneath every love there's hate, it hasn't been long
Your drugs are still tweaking my mind
Now I'm stuck alone holding onto every breath I can find
Here's to the sleepless nights I love to call home
Tsk tsk, here come the smashing lights corrupting the proposal of life
Seeping through my pores comes the rush that crossfades me
I'll use your love at my disposal​

I wrote this about my "bf"

 

[(Wordy)]

I like. Especially this line:

Seeping through my pores comes the rush that crossfades me

 

[Mehm]

very passionate, a good read. thanks, I hope you feel better soon

 

[manic_panic]

outstanding. as Mehm implied above, you're a passionate writer. in basic terms you're a damn good one. don't let anyone tell ya different. I 'preciate this poem, and urge you to keep writing

-R