"Ode to Beth"

[human paraquat]

-O! unattainable, ill-fated love
love of squelched desire and past indiscretion
love of deceit, infidelity, lust
now partial, meaningless love
but love nonetheless!

 

[RareForm]

this was great! it reads longer than it is, says alot....thanks for sharing!

 

[cherub]

perfect wording for a perfect piece!!!

great job!

 

[punktuality]

*nods*