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ode to an old "friend" (sarcasm intended in title)

chrissy

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Remember when we were so close?
We used to spend hours together,
Picking up strangers at parties
On balmy summer nights.
Laughing until our bellies hurt;
We’d always offer each other’s shoulder
You’ve distanced yourself from me,
Turned into an unreachable memory.

And I’m left standing-
You’re pretending nothing’s changed.
Of course the years weathered me,
It’s obvious thoughts are now rearranged.
Why do you not care?
I think I know what is your problem:
You know people need you, so you go and fail them.

It’s been two years already: two!
Unimaginable, indescribable passing
Of time.
Funny how with each new day that comes,
Another old one is erased from our memory.
You like playing tricks
Having your fun, getting your kicks.

You take our secrets, even the most inner
And leave us…
With nothing.
Time, you’re life’s biggest winner.


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Ode to an Old Friend (aka Too Manic Too Function).

I remember the quiet nights
Down at the Wickham,
"drama, drama"
attention intended.

Oh my sneaky little Gypsy,
with your equally sneaky
cheating little girlfriend
( 4 times, atari, 4 times),

My my, how I will miss the dramas.
the screaming, the fighting
to and fro
transient, like your loyalties

How we will miss you so.
I WANT MY PINK SHIRT BACK.


HAHAHHA. MP, I hope you are pleasantly surprised. If only you posted in Words.
 
oh my span of control reaches farther than you think CS

:p

absolutely beautiful. poetry in motion.

and don't worry - methinks the drama is FAR from over danny

far. from. over.

where licker is, drama follows.

:)
 
^^^^^ glorious, in fact.

Don't know about others, but I couldn't live without sarcasm.=D =D
 
ermmm... great. and here i was hoping to get feedback on my shit :\ ah well.
 
chrissy said:
ermmm... great. and here i was hoping to get feedback on my shit :\ ah well.

Sorry, mate, wasn't quite sure what the forum guideline's were in Words.

Needless to say, should have read them first before posting and have now done so.8(

Again, my apologies.


Great ode by the way=D
 
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