Obsession

[FaerieBum]

So I lay here in bed
Chose not to go out with friends
It all seems so pointless now
nothing to do
nothing to say
the cycle repeats itself
and each time I feel a little sicker
I crack my mouth open, no words fall out
yet a thousand thoughts
fly through my head like leaves in the wind
A single thought stands out
A lone flower in a field
You.

I want to scream, to cry
to gaze into your clear blue eyes
drown in your ocean
have it swallow me whole
to feel my flesh on yours
Its all so wrong, I know
I want to you to press your lips to mine
for our naked bodies to intertwine
like the vines that tighten around my heart
and the weeds of obsession
polluting the garden of my mind.

 

[bisKi]

I crack my mouth open, no words fall out
yet a thousand thoughts
fly through my head like leaves in the wind
A single thought stands out
A lone flower in a field
You.

very nice, especially the quoted part

 

[Raz]

That was really good, I especially liked the visual aspect of the second verse...nice use of words.

--Raz--

 

[cherub]

nice real balance of words,, and flowed well. enjoyed reading it alot.

I understand that wanting to just delete life sometimes and not get out of bed,,, we have all been there,,, just nice when we join life again.

 

[PsychoKitten]

^^^ what she said

this is lovely

 

[rogue2go]

come as you are
down the long brooding purple sadness
touch the warm wet undulation
with your eyes sublime
hold the yielding sleep of death
enfolded in a cloak of snow.