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Mellabopper

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woman and man
strangers
public place
conversing
getting to
know
each other
the woman sees the future -
friendship
connection
love
marriage
white picket fences
children
they talk more
get to know each other a bit more
have a drink
or a few
smiling
flirting
"how about we go back to my place"
and
leaving together
the man sees the future -
object of desire
lust
power
penetration
thrusting
screaming, not his but hers
power
man-hood
power
they have a few more drinks
she says she should go
she gives him her number
he turns up the music
and as she turns to leave
and was about to unlock the door
he grabs her hand and pulls her to him
how romantic, she thinks
it's beginning, he thinks
taken by surprise
he wraps his hands around her waist
and lifts her off of the ground
but we just met, she thinks
i cant wait, he thinks
he pushes her up against the door
he is much stronger than she
he starts to take off her shirt
she tries to stop him
she tries
but he pushes her to the ground
she is scared
he reaches up her skirt
and unzips his pants
she screams
but the music is too loud
she tries to fight
but he is too strong
objectification
power
penetration
thrusting
screaming, not his but her own
coming from her innocence
which has been lost
her soul being ripped out of her body
tears running down her face
blood running down her legs
he no longer sees a woman
he sees an object
how do you like that, bitch? he asks
he feels like 'the man'
he has control
and power
things he never had while growing up
the look on her face could break a heart
in those few minutes
of pain, agony, horror
she has been lost
the next time she will look into the mirror
she wont even see a person
she will only see the object she was to him
she isnt a person anymore
not to her
and he never saw her as a person anyway
he saw her as a woman
which in his eyes
is only a object
and nothing more.
Mellabopper
10-20-01
 
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As usual, your words amaze me. It is sad that women are treated as toys instead of humans.
Purely amazing.
Brownie
 
wow... that was the most powerful, yet sad, poem i've read in a while. you really have a way with words.
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~susan
"it is more intimate to get into someone's mind than to get into their body"
i've said my piece... peace out.
AIM: imJUSTaSNERK
 
I hope the time when we all realize the 'difference between men and women' is a socially-reinforced myth is coming soon...so men will stop behaving that way, stop feeling like there's any NEED to behave that way.
Amazing words...so true they sting....
{{{{{MELLA}}}}}
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A mystery inside an enigma wrapped in something orange and fuzzy....
"Ed Meese should be ass-fucked by an acid-crazed elk."-Dr. Hunter S. Thompson
"This is what you get,
When you mess with Us."-Radiohead, "Karma Police"
 
Very,very awesome mella. I've seen several of your posts lately where it seems that you've been bothered by things related to gender roles/objectificating lately, and I can understand why. Glad this (something I see as constructive) is what could come from those feelings.
 
fizzy - *ding*ding*ding*ding*ding* you win.
::does fizzy::
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you can read me way too well. gender roles/objectification has definitely been one issue that i've been focusing on as of late - so recently i guess that's the mini-battle i've been fighting for.
i am woman, hear me roar!
Mella
 
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wow, this is written so well. after reading this i was literally left feeling helpless.
a very somber *great job* for the mella
(((((mella)))))
[This message has been edited by Billy Wonka (edited 23 October 2001).]
 
as usual, you ROCK.
someone ought to publish this somewhere.
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
"It's the heart afraid of breaking that never learns to dance. It's the dream afraid of waking that never takes a chance. It's the one who won't be taken who cannot seem to give. And the soul afraid of dying, that never learns to live."
 
Look Just you Women Go Easy On uS When you Take This Place oVer
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The worst face picture in the world ever!!
-By Me
Autographs after the show...
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/me tells Dagny not to cry...not to waste any tears if this ever happened to her or if it happened to anyone....we're strong and nothing can't ever change that!!
Now...hear me ROAR!!!!!
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Goddess
Don't hold to anger, hurt or pain. They steal your energy and keep you from love. ~ Leo Buscaglia ~
 
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