Noxius

[RareForm]

Pin me up and under. It's words that pierce
my ears and eyes. Cries, subside, I'll fly so high,
and I'll wonder. Games we play are so insignificant.
The tears I will cry will dry and sprout flowers. Power,
devours, I'll ooze with a temperament.

 

[froggygirl]

Cries, subside, I'll fly so high,
and I'll wonder. Games we play are so insignificant.
The tears I will cry will dry and sprout flowers.

I liked this one a lot too, you're an amazing writer..

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Very Nice write Cuz. Enjoyed it.

 

[KaideAlike44]

Sweet!

 

[Dekloren]

Werd.

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

That was nice. I liked it.

 

[human paraquat]

this is really great, it has a distinct rhythm.. your originality is inspiring

 

[onetwothreefour]

very good.

i love "The tears I will cry will dry and sprout flowers".

 

[TiberCross]

me likey. keep experimenting.

 

[cherub]

Temper temper

I like the orginality of this, but that is what i like about you, you willing to try something different. Great stuff!!