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harraser

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yesterday i decided that it was the moments that mattered
and the long run less so, except its sum of small moments
and now i recant and my selfish desires tell me
"think of the long run!
why continue a struggle so temporary?
cut your losses, its all so inevidably over"

and at this very moment comes through the speakers
"its hard to remember its hard to remember
that we're alive for the first time
its hard to remember its hard to remember
that we're alive for the last time
its hard to remember its hard to remember
to live before you die
its hard to remember its hard to remember
that our lives are such a short time
its hard to remember its hard to remember
when it takes such a long time"

and i remember.

the last page of my journal says:

"it came and you embraced it
it moved away and you chased it
now its gone
and its time to let it go"
 
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"it came and you embraced it
it moved away and you chased it
now its gone
and its time to let it go"


Very pertinent advice.

I think what I like about your writing ant is that different people can take different things away from it. Often I'm left wondering about what you were thinking about when you wrote these pieces, but even without knowing, there is always an element that speaks to me for whatever reason, and I think that is the mark of a good writer.

<3
 
Awesome!!


"it came and you embraced it
it moved away and you chased it
now its gone
and its time to let it go"


This is going to stick with me for a long time!
 
katmeow said:
"it came and you embraced it
it moved away and you chased it
now its gone
and its time to let it go"


Very pertinent advice.

I think what I like about your writing ant is that different people can take different things away from it. Often I'm left wondering about what you were thinking about when you wrote these pieces, but even without knowing, there is always an element that speaks to me for whatever reason, and I think that is the mark of a good writer.

<3

I can definitely agree with the "different people can take different things away from it".... Although i have not read alot of your work, i'm very impressed and i hope to see more...:D
 
thanks guys :) i edited it to change the quote i fucked up.. i was in such haste to type it out while it was in my ears i skipped the repeating lines and forgot to add them in later. ahh well. its from a song called Lives by Modest Mouse
 
if theres one thing that stands out in the way you write and especailly in this peice its these few words...

while only being a few words they still (to me) create the most powerfull line in this peice...

its time to let it go.

it isnt easy to do...but it is possible :)

*mwah* <3
 
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