now ive started....

[little_vandal]

.... im not going to stop posting here hehe.

yet again something i wrote a while ago. i like it. kinda sad i guess, and not an actual event that has occured to me, infact i dont even recall the inspiration (nope, its not radiohead haha).


this part of me, it's yours,
you left it behind,
engraved with your initials,
in the form of a bruise,
and those cuts won't heal,
because they're deeper than the flesh,
they burn into the soul,
you see my eyes,
darkened by force,
and i see your weakness,
it scares you,
but all i have for you now is pity

 

[(Wordy)]

I can definitely relate to the feeling expressed, and I like how each line leads on to the next (with some unexpected turns along the way).

I'd be interested to read some more recent stuff from you, if you have some to share.