nothing in particular

[Snoopy]

emotions elude the restless
until we're all found breathless
prelude to depression
success is found in waterless puddles of insanity
driven to the ground, plowed into the surface, withered into
defeat.
breathless aggression tests the hopelessness
faults of mine, faults of twine, interweave my faults of past time.
i want to cry.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

success is found in waterless puddles of insanity

Nice feel to this piece, I like how it ryhmes and then doesn't in places. Good write!

 

[katmeow]

Short but sweet

Good use of language... I liked it!