Nothing compares....

[doofqueen]

The sun in my hair
The dirt in my toes
Is nothing compared to
Your fingers on my face.

The beats of a dance floor
The beauty of a raindrop
Is nothing compared to
The smell of your sweet scent

The colours of a sunset
The breeze on my skin
Is nothing compared to
What you make me feel within.

The clap of a thunderstorm
The light from the stars
Is nothing compared to
The warmth I feel when you look into my eyes.

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I read poems here and feel like my stuff is so un complex and cheesy in comparison

 

[Baker]

well I liked it, so it doesn't matter
Makes me think you're quitting the hippie doof scene for the sake of a new love.
hope that's not true
Although it's very nice to read about a new love that surpasses an older one.

 

[colicolo]

beautiful. not that i've come to expect anything different from your amazing work.

 

[doofqueen]

^^ thanks very much colico... wow really... thanks heaps

baker - thanks :D I think i kinda am and i didnt mean for it to sound that way. Not giving it up... it's a huge part of who i am. I guess i am just happy to stay at home these days and was just desribing the things i found beautiful