Nothing back

[Wild1Xu]

See you
Hear you
Feel you
Want you
-
And all of these things
Not one
Do I get in return
-
My hand
My heart
My soul
My life
-
And all of these things
Not one
Do I get in return
-
Need you
Desire you
Cherish you
Love you
-
And all these things I devote to you
And yet
I get nothing back
-
Do you feel these too
Or do I love a dream
And not a man

 

[jaymie]

I like this a lot. It speaks deeply something I've felt before.

 

[RareForm]

Beautiful piece Sweet. I believe this is the first poem i've ever read of yours, maybe this is the first one you've ever posted, i don't know..lol..either way it's gooood.

:D

~Drew

 

[Wild1Xu]

hehe.. it's the first one... I'm trying to remember some of the ones i've written... I left my book of poems at home

But thanks you two!