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nothing at all

crshnbrn200

Bluelighter
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Location
somewhere in my mind
Standing before I do see
the armor that has been built
so skillfully.
It doesn't hide
that which appears
the fear in your eyes.

Wounded, that look
hunted it seems.
It's an interesting thing
to see before me
someone's shattered dreams.

They think me unfeeling
heartless and cold
but really,
if I were could I
truly bear witness
aknowledge and
symphatize with
the evidence of that
which has struck you so low?
I see it, in your eyes
I hear it in your voice.

Think me not
only what I appear.
Don't look to me
with fear and dread
that I may topple
those tenuous walls
you've so painstakingly
contructed.

Good you see
the truth standing
before.
I could crush you
and feel nothing at all.
 
A different piece from you, interesting read, even tho you feel nothing at all there seems to be a feeling of not losing ones self (standing firm), or perhaps not letting ones own walls fall?

Think me not
only what I appear.

Should be my motto really ;)
 
I was trying to strive more for the thought of another's so carefully constructed walls interfering with living their lives where as mine are not preventing, but protecting...not sure if I even got the point as I wanted it to. Pieces have a tendency to take on a life of their own.
 
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