Not enough

[vurtomatic]

It's almost
a year and forever
still counting, still dreading

When a switch got flicked
(just like that)
a light extinguished
a room plunged into darkness
but for your eyes shining
in the dark

You looked around
suddenly alone again
as the one person who understood
had already left, with that flick of a switch

There's no one left, is there
and these words are not enough

And I am here
outside your room
not enough.

 

[RareForm]

that was really good, still putting this together in my mind..

 

[PsychoKitten]

((vurt))

miss you kiddo

 

[Martyr's Wife]

very good

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

hiya vurto

 

[cherub]

I have always been fond of your writting this some strikes a cord but i can't place why,,,,, good stuff man

 

[katmeow]

And I am here
outside your room
not enough.

Nice work... good to see your writing here again

 

[up all night]

I wish this guy posted more.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Man this was good, like Cherub said, it gets to me - but I can't say why...

 

[DarkPoet]

very, very nice

 

[up all night]

I miss this guy. This piece would be painfully desperate if it wasn't so controlled. Instead it is a beautifully poignant reminder of the long standing sensation of loss and inadequacy. Awesome.