no, it doesn't rhyme.

[jameslovesyou]

she's in the kitchen
making limeaid for the
stolen vodka
because it's
limeaid or nothing
and i'm sitting on the couch...
she begins to drum
with objects found
and i...
i am content.
her rhythm
is my rhythm.
tonight we will
writhe
and moan
and she will come
all over my
face
fingers
and cock
we will share
the most intimate
closeness
~~we will love each other~~
to death.

DJ Thebain

 

[(Wordy)]

Love this opening... the small details make it so vivid and lifelike:

she's in the kitchen
making limeaid for the
stolen vodka
because it's
limeaid or nothing
and i'm sitting on the couch...
she begins to drum
with objects found

 

[Raz]

um...that was really hot. %)