Nightmares

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nightmares

I thought I met you last night
those pretty awkward knees
I took your hand and
you faded like steam

I thought I met you today
stared into your diamond eyes
your lop-sided bangs and
you withered with a smile

I hope I don't ever have to see you
but I bet I will again tomorrow
you still carry that long black cloud
that endless rain of sorrow

 

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Nitemare-Homegrown
Don’t you think you’ve had it up to stare scare Dare it’s just another nitemare

I’m pretty glad you gone hare aware clare, stank wake ser, you krrp it up rite there.

Rick and Rob plea run up the apoethecary, ah shit son, it’s norml stoops ordinary.

And if you have to break enter my sanctuary, go fuck yourself, rubber stun gun, yeh, route 2 death harper ferry.

There’s no one to blame, you’re playing a game.

I wake up it’s the same ol morning glory story horrid you fine stubble goose porcupine

If it were up to me, I’d hit a c, fine letter b, and have them see, you aint got those double d

Incubi gonna cussubi, too sky so high get swigless on that wi-fi

I aint goin try to lose sight so fight I might take it easy on that overnight mare don’t care I’m attack ya like a polar bear.

Then tunnel phantom lurking in the shadow.

You feel me steppin on a you.
Crush

 

[cduggles]

pretty awkward knees

I took your hand and
you faded like steam

you still carry that long black cloud
that endless rain of sorrow

Favorite lines. Great imagery.

 

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[tubgirl.jpg]

Favorite lines. Great imagery.

Thank you so much @cduggles
I "hear" the words in my head, but in swedish, so sometimes alot gets lostin translation. It very encouraging hearing it doesn't translate into gibberish all the time

 

[RareForm]

Yes, agreed—excellent imagery. You're a prolific writer.

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

Yes, agreed—excellent imagery. You're a prolific writer.

That's high praise - thanks for the kind words, man.

 

[ControlDaddy]

I took your hand and
you faded like steam

Can feel this, so easily.

your lop-sided bangs and
you withered with a smile

You make it linger.

you still carry that long black cloud
that endless rain of sorrow

Great poem. Very keen and certain.

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

Thank you mr @ControlDaddy !

 

[F.U.B.A.R.]

You came to me, I objected.

You abused me, I relented.

You fucked me, I dissented.

I hate you, I'm demented.

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

You came to me, I objected.

You abused me, I relented.

You fucked me, I dissented.

I hate you, I'm demented.

I can relate ;D

 

[ControlDaddy]

You came to me, I objected.

You abused me, I relented.

You fucked me, I dissented.

I hate you, I'm demented.

Not sure why, but it reminds me of my favorite aphorism I picked up in AA:
I want what I want when I want it, and if I have to ask for it, I don't want it anymore.