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nice guy

FixXxer

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nice guy walks away.
she pleads for him to stay
nice guy smiles and turns
now he feels a slap, burned,
what he had earned,
means shit, she took advantage again,
she undertook,
something better than love in book,
she was mistook.

nice girl, kisses the world.
her hair straightened not curled.
she eyes for the nice guy.
cannot be found. not a sound.
she sits alone.
how does she ever go back home.
for now, she must roam.
to lurk in self pity.
one guy too many, makes to take the fall steady.

nice people wave their hands,
can hear them cheering in the stands,
and the roaring of the bands.
but the sands of time,
remind of a time.
carefree and true.
im something new.
confident.
and paranoid.

never let the nice guy get hurt,
hes the one passing his shirt,
to a cold woman, warm for another squirt.
having fun, enjoying life.
none of this keif.
jus faith it will be alright.

don't let the nice girl be discouraged,
flowers dead before flourish,
keep the sunflowers up like towers.
all light, it happily devours
keep her without doubt.
nice guy is here. big or small pout.

nice people continue to impress.
the ability of 18, caress such a depress,
agility, and smile constantly there.
workin for his father. never a need for scare.
becoming closer every hour.
even offers dad a shower.

nice guy loves you.
nice girl needs you.
nice people have pain. just as insane as the one in my maine.
 
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don't let the nice girl be discouraged,
flowers dead before flourish,

i'm putting a "they" b4 "flourish" when i read this.
whaddya think?

are you the nice guy?
youve posted two rather lonely feeling pieces these past few days.
chin up... you wont find her looking down at your feet!
 
thank u for both the suggestion and advice spgeddi. i actually think they would work better there. thank u.

sadly dek. thats too true. :| id know.
 
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