new poem..i juss wrote it...

[Scoob-E-doo]

i am open to constructive criticism...so please tell me whut u really think....thanx
Patiently Waiting
Standing in the distance
Looking for something
Trying to piece together
Everything is gone
Some of it here
Some of it there
Hoping to find
When will it all end
Spinning minds around
Churning and burning all
Nothing can survive
Whirling path of Destruction.
*~Scooby~*

 

[Genavieve515]

I really like this poem. I am not sure what your message is, but I definitely get a perspective of life here.
Love,
Genavieve

 

[Scoob-E-doo]

well....the poem is about how my life has fallen to pieces again....how im tryin to find myself again.....but there is too much in the way......it keeps on stopin me.....holdin me back.......its barrier is the path of destruction.......
*~Scooby~*