never good enough

[LilBlondie]

i'm trying
i promise
i'm trying
so hard

efforts hidden
deep within
to only dissapoint one:
me

i'll never be as smart as him
i'll never be as pretty as her
why do you persist on these comparisons
i am me, fucking me, mistakes and all

i'm trying
i promise
i'm trying
so hard

don't blame me
i just hide my effort
this way you can't acknowledge my failure
if i dont care, if i dont care

the thing is, i do care
now the comparison is
they try so much harder
harder than you

fuck off
i'm trying
i'm trying
so hard

i'll never satisfy you
i'll never be good enough
even this poem
isn't even good enough

 

[angel!na]

i'll never be as smart as him
i'll never be as pretty as her
why do you persist on these comparisons
i am me, fucking me, mistakes and all

I loved this paragraph.

 

[frostyangel]

I like this alot.. start trying hard for yourself, noone else.. because in the end you realize..the most important thing is you..

And it will make you happy..

 

[cherub]

I hope you realize from writting this you do have strengths all your own and writting this shows what a talented writter you are to put those words down.