Need help writing a limerick

[abefourth]

I have an amazing mental health case worker manager who works hard to make sure her mental health clients succeed in life. She uses a "team" of people to achieve this. I wanted to surprise her with a limerick. I came up with something but I'm worried it's not that good. Any suggestions would be helpful. This is what I have so far:

There once was an angel named Christine
Working hard to make things pristine
Treating clients with care and love
Always going beyond and above
Making us all a King and Queen

 

[chippermonk]

That's very nice and the sentiment is excellent
I'm no limerick expert ( though I did once spend a day in Limerick) but I think maybe the line lengths need to be changed a bit. Maybe make the 3rd and 4th lines a couple syllables shorter than lines one and two, and make line 5 the same length as one and two ( so it's longer than 3 and 4)
You're very close

 

[notsmokeymcpot42088]

There once was an angel named Christine
when she visits no patients go missing
shes was fast with the scripts
she granted my wishes
So thats why her ass I am kissing

there once was an angel named christine
whose paces kept the place pristine
she was sent from above
with patience and love
I thank her my heart is still ticking

*edit there I tried an appropriate one using your rhyme scheme*


Sorry --- it will be well received as long as you stick with yours.

My family hails from near limerick--ish. Cl
ose enough