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my random haiku / poetry

doofqueen said:
you didnt lol I comment on lot's of poetry... i'm just not very good at critiquing and just knowing what to say ... wish i was better at it ... i like what i like but a lot of the time i have trouble desribing why if that makes sense?
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yeah... thats how I am... as you can see from my general comments on your work :o
 
9/28/07 (9:35 am)

inhale my essence

vision clearer through the smoke

now open your eyes
 
I like the vaperous essence of teh haiku i read it about 10 times and still the words are ellusive something that tumbles through emparting meaning that last but a sweet second.
 
Ive never really seen someone good at writing haiku's but you nailed it. I really liked Time Line of an American it was entertainingly simple but well put. It almost sounded like it could be in a song. You write any lyrics for tracks or only poetry?
 
realm said:
Ive never really seen someone good at writing haiku's but you nailed it. I really liked Time Line of an American it was entertainingly simple but well put. It almost sounded like it could be in a song. You write any lyrics for tracks or only poetry?
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just spontaneous outbursts...

nobody knows I write poetry other than myself and you people reading this.
 
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seductress in black

the window, she blindly tempts

nevermind-- bad teeth
 
two hawks tangle there

asian girl in knee-high boots

soar away morning
 
10/14/07 (10:01 pm)


needle to the track

anticipation surges-.




oops! powers not on
 
like a grain of rice
it expands unto itself
so it may remember thine
 
running running running
gotta catch that
thing

fuck
there it goes
now you're all sweaty


and late.
 
we have the power
to put a man on the moon,
to put a spacecraft in orbit.

how have we not have the ability
to solve the problems that
matter:

violence, hate, hunger...
trillions for NASA
but nothing for you.

here is the answer:
they don't give a fuck
about you.

here is the question:
what will you do?
 
autoeroticbiography

Eruption… AHHHH!
A moment of ecstasy
Little did they know,
What a mistake they had just made.
We’ll call him… Matthew-
Gift of God.
Little did they wonder…
Nine months of weight and waiting,
To deliver a little bastard child into
A bastard world.
Sloshing in her fluids, until that fateful moment,
Driven by an interstellar overdrive
I plunged outward and upward,
Met by a smack- welcome to Hell
Get used to it,
Little one.

Eighteen years of betterment,
Met with little resentment-
It’s in your best interest they said.
Little did I ponder…
Who is the better educator?:
Them, the World, or me?

Indecision spawned stalling,
Quickly, college came calling.
Four more years in our penitentiary
Built to heard the cattle down an ever narrowing tunnel.
At the edge of the Abyss now, decisions must be made.
Purify the mind and travel down the Road Less Taken
Or succumb to the Machine?
Have a cigar, boy… You’re gonna go far,
Progenitor of this name- fuck/spawn/and die
In our name.

Learning to fly, I make the fateful choice…
Running like hell towards an uncertain future,
All obstacles clear from view-
No longer obscured by clouds.
 
tea-driven gangster mushroom rap

been drinkin' tea like
a crack-fiend,
I'm ready to go!

at the base of all my questions
is what I already know:

crush the ego like a miner
puttin' hammer to rock,
still all this outside bullshit
aint so easy to block.

with the aid of the fungus
crush my desires with ease,
comin' down way too fast?
better spark up them trees!
 
Cro-Magnon man smoking trees with ease
aint no hassle from the man, nobody to appease.
evolutionary forces brought us to where we're at today
if those monkeys saw us now, I wonder what'd they say?

The mind oppressors changin' appearance like hairdressers,
aint nobody seein' the government,
'til its tryin' to arrest us.
hands behind your back,
you can't say that Jack!
got us locked up in prison like a fuckin' lab rat.

Only one known cure to ease these lurkin' ills
lemme' educate you son: it aint in those pills...
Pharmaceuticals? lemme school ya:
nine outta ten companies?
they screwin' ya.

Lets start a natural revival:
get that fungus that's amongus,
start eating them grams n' your brains get humongous.

outside the box isn't what they want us to do,
but that's the exact impact the fungus has on you.
stirring your mind like a cauldron on boil
lets start this revolution like a snake in a coil,
ready to snap back like a mouse trap.

snap! crackin' necks from DC to the UN
startin' a revolution with our pens...
 
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random government rant~ version(?)

Who gave you the power to tell me what's best?
expand your mind and separate from the rest.
real power comes in the form of knowledge,
hit your books man- you don't need no college.
professors lying like snakes in the grass,
still they're moldin' minds like alpha-brass.
nobody thinks to question their authority,
turns out they only represent the minority.
three outta four kids failin' out these days,
who's to blame 'em when sellin' smoke pays?
government hustles more than Pablo Escobar
outlaw the weed but allow that cancer-tar.
shit rolls down from the top of the hill,
claiming they got the right- this is God's Will.
killing brown people like it's a twisted hobby,
makin' us feel like we live in Abu Dhabi.
don't protest you scum, that's unpatriotic,
only one word on my mind, thats: despotic!
 
red light consciousness

hit the gas it's green!!!
honking horns and screaming men






what__ a __ gorgeous __ day......
 
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