my. hands. are. cold.

[apocalyptic vendetta]

tissues soft. touched. my hand. forward. back.
eyes. wide. glossed lips. finger tips. dirty.
tobacco. stains. you’re. so. cool. staring.
in to. space. far. wide. gone.
came back. lost. touch. grasp.
reality. struck. hard. baseball bat.
bloody face. eyes. shut. gasp.
for air. staring. at nothing.
there. in. your. mind. life.
is. not. life. what were you.
expecting? I. am. a. dream.
dreaming. rest. assured.
wake up. one day.
find. it. all.
heaven. staring.
back. at. me.
glazed eyes. hurting. hands.
held out. needy. wanting.
gone. always. reality.
isn't. real. freedom.
isn't. free.
we. want. you.
I. love. you.
words. we. don't. want.
to. hear. ring true.
on. deaf. ears.
trust. broken.
lies. are. truth. keep.
your. friends. close.
and your. enemies. closer.
hold. your chest. out.
breathe. exhale.
starless. night.
blackness. hearts.
are. stolen. 20 minutes.
or less. or. your. money.
back.
descend. forwards.
take. a step.
wait. for nothing.
nothing. loves.
you. all.
[ 12 January 2002: Message edited by: apocalyptic vendetta ]

 

[Sara Tonin]

I love the halting way you wrote this. It makes you keep stopping and running the words together, that you're not totally sure go together. Very nice choice of words too.

 

[yoUr bLiSS]

i really like how this was written also..just randome sporadic thoughts progressing from one thing to another..

 

[apocalyptic vendetta]

I think.... entirely too much.

 

[spinkle]

I have the same problem, AV. Interesting technique, well executed.

 

[Shuddr2Think]

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