My first song (WIP)

[CoRrUpTeD_]

Before i post the song im gonna give you a lil insight on my life. I play the Bass in a band that me and the group i have been chillin with since 7th/8th grade. I like to sing along to any song i know, and people said i had a good voice. So, when im not playing/practicing the bass, im practicing singing and growling.

Anyways, I was sitting around the other day tweaking hard and i started this song (plan in finishing it w/o meth). And i want to know what you guys think of it so far.

KEEP IN MIND ITS STILL A WORK IN PROGRESS AND HAS NO TITLE!!!

UN-TITLED

[singing]
Now im realizing,
How my mind is changing,
What once was real,
Has lost its feel.

All the drugs i have taken
All the places i've been
All of my friends
I don't want it to end

The way i used to think
Is now changed in a blink
What i loved is no longer around
But look what i've found

[growling/screaming]

IT'S MY LIFE!!!
AND YOU CAN'T TAKE IT!!!
BUT YOU'LL TRY!!!
AND YOU'LL HATE IT!!!
BECAUSE I WON'T DIE!!!
AND YOU CAN'T FACE IT!!!


That's ll i have for now i'll be adding the rest as i come up with it, i also started a second song, but it doesn't seem to flow. But when i finish this one i'll work on the other and post it up for you guys, it's basically about how the government lies to our youth and to us even when they know and try to make us follow.

Thanks for reading, please let me know what you think, like and don't like.

Peace.

 

[colicolo]

i like it. what style of music do you play? who are your influences?