My first poem in the Words forum...

[Fetish Jester]

Heya. I've been writing for a while now, and I've decided to start posting the less crap ones on the board. So to start off, here's one I wrote at a party.
The whole world is an orange,
Or possibly a smallish pear.
And a largish radish can be the moon,
Grapes shall be the stars.
And a little kitty can be our god
And treat us all the way we would.

 

[spinkle]

Read much Cummings?
btw--keep writing...AND posting
[ 26 March 2002: Message edited by: spinkle ]

 

[E-girl]

very nice. short and sweet. hope to see more of you in here!

 

[rm-rf]

lol that sounds like .03 seconds of what goes through my head wit acid lol
love the orange referance too.. mmmmmm

 

[Fetish Jester]

Thanks.
I must point out that I was VERY trashed when I wrote it. At the time, I thought it was the most profound thing I wrote.

 

[plazma]

Nice!
-plaz out-

 

[evilcalvin]

Short, yet gets the job done.Nice one! :D