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my birth of death

Taliana

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Im lost.
Trying to juggle the emotions
created in the worlds
twisted illustions
of reality

I am an incredible power
unto myself
The only one with the key to
unleash my own curse of nature

Bound by no fear
but willing to love
chained to a heart that belongs not to me
but to a power that has taken over my being

I seek to find, to learn, to give, to love,
and all the while
I am aware of my own mortality.

It is my own birth of death
that is looking out over the sun filled fields...
Looking out onto the horizon of life
of which i walk.

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Its been a while since i have written. All it takes is for me to get some inspiration, and that i now have.
 
Profoundly Timeless. True.

Art - the production, expression, or realm of what is beautiful. (Random House Dict.)

Your inspiration fueled the truth with which your piece resonates and puts to rest our other worries, thoughts, cares, fears....only to align them again viewed though the lens of a different panaroma of reality as it truly exists. An infinite reality. The TRUE reality.

Thanks

Your piece is art
 
Taliana said:
Bound by no fear
but willing to love
chained to a heart that belongs not to me
but to a power that has taken over my being

I'm glad you decided to write, this was certainly above par.
 
<3

Originally posted by Taliana
I am an incredible power
unto myself
The only one with the key to
unleash my own curse of nature

Bound by no fear
but willing to love
chained to a heart that belongs not to me
but to a power that has taken over my being

^This was divine.
I love the clarity in this piece - the honest emotion.

I also think I can identify with this.
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Phorindicator- thankyou for your kind & intelligent words, and thanks rareform and COTB too :)
Its great coming here and reading comments on my poetry...

Inspires me to keep writing. :)
 
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