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pk.

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The mindless consumption illuminates tradition;
A to b to c to d
And all over again tomorrow.


A tourist in pre-established utopia.


It's not mine,
This culture is not mine.

These artifacts have pre-fashioned logic,
I scan it's properties and discard
Its use, creating new artifacts.


The consumption continues.


The world is cluttered
With debris from dead people past.

The shit that got them through.
The shit that made life tolerable--
Stifling the next generation.


We are trapped here and we know it.


Begging for microchips
To control the heart;
Feeling has become too painful.



Create New Egypt



With silent whips.
 
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I like it a lot dude.

I have an urge to change "dead people past" to "dead people passed"

Also the first time you used "its" you have an apostrophe where there shouldn't be one.

Very good though.
 
Thanks to the both of you.

I'll be waiting with bated breath in regards to the outcome of the microchip implant legislation in the US, 2017.
 
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