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Part I
And when I journeyed across interstate to be
temporarily,
with more than just a mate.
From the window seat in the plane I saw
insanity or fate?

Yet again, I couldn’t know
but I’d love to find out
side I’m honestly gregarious
but inside I’m against the tide.
On the shore of decision
will my choice make me poor?
Will it settle the final score?
I’m not sure.
I don’t have the mettle to test what’s in store

for me as I look outside the window
I’m gonna discover
and end this stupid show
Realise that you could be my lover
when all the time I was pretending
that I never know

Part II
And when we declared our relationship on facebook,
the inner most sensibilities of our world shook.
I love you,
and these three words is all it took
to cement the rose-tint upon all things we look.
My world shakes
Our world shook
Three words is all it takes
To write the most beautiful book.
 
Very nice, it all flows together so well and doesn't come off cheesy or anything like that. Good job :D
 
Thank you very much for the kind words guys and gals.

It makes me happy to have what I share appreciated :-)
 
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