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[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

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Running scared
Through liquid time
Thrashing my soul
Like a violent

Flame licks high
Runs toward the open sand
Dancing thick ruins of pain

Lightening eats it
Lifts it under
Pushes its licking brown
Head

Run out
Run over, run through the silent
Knaw over rushing blood red.

 

[KaideAlike44]

this was good.

 

[Dandy]

.:MOTiON-TiED:.

Running scared
Through liquid time
Thrashing my soul
Like a violent

Enjoyed this entire piece although this stanza was particularly enthralling.

I thought so upon reading it after you had wrote it and I still think so. The piece as a whole does such a great job in combining the images in a sort of 'stop-motion' way in my head, very cool.