Monster's of Meth (a totally free novel)

[DRMorgan]

Hi! I wrote a thriller with plot points that turn on ecstasy, GHB, cocaine, alcohol, and crystal meth. It's about the accidental death of a one-night stand, its sloppy coverup, and the unraveling of a man. It is free on Inkitt, which is an ad-free app. It's called Monsters of Meth

I'd love for you to take a look and leave feedback if you'd like. It'd mean a lot to get some readers. Thank you!

 

[daturetard]

So far not bad. I don't read romance shit but the only advice I have so far is to change the line of ketamine to a bump.
Also aren't most 'mitsubishi' x tabs PMA?

 

[DRMorgan]

I made the bump change as you recommended. That was a nice call. Thank you. Mitsus was a popular ecstasy/ MDMA tablet in 1999/2000.

 

[DRMorgan]

Oh. I put Romance because that's what so many Inkitt readers read. It's a thriller with some horror thrown in. I promise I'm not putting you through a romance novel. Promise!

 

[daturetard]

Oh. I put Romance because that's what so many Inkitt readers read. It's a thriller with some horror thrown in. I promise I'm not putting you through a romance novel. Promise!

Lol. Got to chapter two. It's not bad writing, imo. Will read more with time. Not much of a reader myself.
Another thing I'd change is the foreshadowing that breaks the fourth wall. I don't think you should say something as blatant as "I will kill her later" but maybe a nod to it..

 

[DRMorgan]

I hear you; I wrote that very recently only because that female character seems pointless without it. I'm challenged with getting people to read the work of an unknown, and I was afraid readers might be turned off by what they thought to be undisciplined writing and quit reading for that reason. I really appreciate your pointing that out, and I'll seriously consider pulling it again.

 

[DRMorgan]

I cut it out. Super valuable for you to mention that. Thanks!