Mommy Tickle Me!

[plazma]

Hahaha Mommy tickle me!
The laughing child's running
Past my eyes, inside my head
Mommy tickle me!
That childish voice screams
As that needle slides up my vein
Forcing heaven into me
Untidy consensual rape
Hahaha Mommy, do it again!
Slumping face first onto grit
Eyes now slits in sudden joy
Blind to the absence of future
Mommy tickle me again!
Mommy kiss it better!
Mommy do it again!
Mommy kiss it better!
So the child laughs
Hahaha Mommy tickle me!
Into my eternity
Choking to death
Blowing baby bubbles of bile
Mommy kiss it better!
Mommy tickle me!
This was a poem that I took quite a lot longer than usual to write, I've been deliberating over it for about an hour, the text style is just to see how I can play with it. I hope you like it.
-plaz out-

 

[cherub]

I like it alot,,,,,,, i miss you dearly darlin,,
feels good to be back!

 

[Angelight]

*applauds*
good stuff

 

[up all night]

I love how you've perfectly melded the past and the present until the boundaries are almost indistinguishable. Innocence and truth colliding. Your writing is always unique and for someone who says their talents don't lie in poetry, you're pretty damn amazing.

Blind to the absence of future.
^ ^ It's funny that so often, that's what we're actually seeking. Peace of mind in the moment of forget? It makes me wonder...

 

[up all night]

Oh and it's Mummy not Mommy you American fool...

 

[E-girl]

wow plaz... probably your best one yet. your words mesmerize me.

 

[plazma]

Up All Night : You know I write for a target audience. *mwah*
Glad you guys liked it.
-plaz out-

 

[apollo]

You're a sick fuck plaz...
But hey, so am I.
I love it

 

[punch e punch]

Very dark and sad, but also very poetic.
Love a good tragedy. Nice werk