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it was.

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temptation.

so close i could almost feel it
leaning in closer got me feeling it
a fucking magnet.
a magnet.
mostly its my self reeling it in
who's else would it be feeding it in?
i stand here. a practice.
standing, sitting, pushing the force away i want oh so badly
cushion this landing, it seems my appetite's clampings are hard of understanding
temptation; so demanding.
i look around for a space between me and my head. pushing away this feeling leaves a bit of dread. it only works if it hurts so since it's hurting through a burning in my yurning for what i can't have.

oh but i can
i can so easily
its only a step away
and only a step away from me

oh but no i cant
its wrong, not the direction i'd like to continue
just once more, one more last view
that's bullshit and you know that, too.

fuck, come on head, it's only us two.

then i shook it off, laughing

it'd be ridiculous to lose to myself since there are no multiples
no more of me.
my head, this appetite, it's all the same being.
it's the understanding that needs to fit in between.

temptation, see what you got me thinking?
what? you're just gunna sit there blinking?
no comment?

temptation, see what you got me thinking?
 
haha.... Dastrix..... don't we know so well

I love this piece also,, it also makes me relate to my own head... :)
 
Yeah, I can definitely relate to this. You've really captured something here, somehow written your way through your own head, followed twists of logic and manage to trace them in words. How is this done? All we're left with is a mysterious black box, and I like that.

I like the unexpected phrasings, the intermittent rhymings.

Love the way you've evoked temptation through the magnet metaphor:

so close i could almost feel it
leaning in closer got me feeling it
a fucking magnet.
a magnet.
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And this stanza is awesome:

oh but no i cant
its wrong, not the direction i'd like to continue
just once more, one more last view
that's bullshit and you know that, too.
Click to expand...

*Goes to search for more works by It Was* =D
 
read to the music of Berlin by Lou Reed

m for the memory
the victory
for eternity free

smile at the wide open view
can you see for ever?
whats at the end?

hear me, the sea
Lou says, "hey babe."

you say,
"my head, this appetite, it's all the same being.
it's the understanding that needs to fit in between"

but what is paradise?
for you, the same as for me?
m for the memory of forever
 
uhhhh...
She has a moist vagina
I particularly enjoy the circumference
I've been sucking the walls of her anus
of her anus

I prefer her to any other

Marijuana(x3)

She had a moist vagina
I prefered her to any other

Marijuana(x11)

uhhhh...


kurt cobain, poet
 
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