Mistake

[WarriorPoet]

 

[colicolo]

and you can't take
what I have to give
you're so afraid of pain
that you forget to live

kisses and horrors
a slash of the blade
my blood poors hot
from the wounds that you made

do it again
do it somemore
cut me, fuck me
i'm just a whore

for the despair

like you care

this piece is so VIBRANT
it reminds me of some of Blink 182 earlier stuff
perhaps more the 'Angels and Airwaves' style now.

i love so many of the great rhymes in this, they maintain the intense emotions so well. this poem pours with passion and the imagery chosen elevates it even more.

its like a modern day version of an angered monologue from shakespare - macbeth comes to mind.

it reads like so much more then a poem, more of a breathtaking, hair rasing, blood boling, heart racing, extreme captivating performance.

... its fucking mad and i love it.

 

[colicolo]

this piece reminded me of these lyrics from Fall Out Boy:

From day one I talked about getting out.
But not forgetting about,
How all my worst fears are letting out.
He said why put a new address on the same old lonliness?
When breathing just passes the time,
Until we all just get old and die.
Now talking's just a waste of breath,
And living's just a waste of death.
And why put a new address on the same old lonliness?
And this is you and me and me and you until we've got nothing left.